Here are the final paints for the Fabelwald Book II antagonists, named Sneaky (left) and Hungry (right).
They are a pair of Ogres who drifted down from the mountains, and became very interested in finding out what human children taste like…
Above are a bunch of sketches from a couple months ago when I was trying to design the main antagonists for Fabelwald Book II, “Dandle & Lion – The Ogre’s Lair”. In the series, “monsters” are corruptions of common animals/life forms. Ogres, according to their own folklore, are the product of the Dark goddess Orsho having taken the form of the giant Mother Bear, and devouring whole any dwarf warriors she came across. This made her pregnant, and she spawned the race of Ogres, who vary in appearance from dwarf-like to bear-like.
The characters seen above are of two different clans, the female “Sneaky” is of the mountain Tor Clan, and more resembles her dwarven ancestry. The male, “Hungry” is of the forest Bear Clan, and more resembles his bear ancestry (although others in his tribe are much more bear-like in appearance).
What I decided to do was give them big arms, stocky legs, and heavy set bodies to resemble bears. As far as the face goes, I made their ears rounded and sitting high on the skull, and gave them elongated snouts and close set, rounded eyes.
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Above you see a manga-styled cover for a free short story I have published on smashwords.com. The story takes place in the Fabelwald world, approximately thirty years before the events in ‘The Mythic Forest’ (available in print/ebook at amazon/apple/createspace/etc… search by title or by my name!)
The story serves to introduce you to one of the major supporting characters we will see in Fabelwald Book II, as well as a couple of new races/creatures. I have too many origin stories laying around, and as much as I’d like to get them into the main books, I’m afraid they would just distract from the main plot line. I remember reading Lord of the Rings (Fellowship of the Ring) and thinking ‘what’s up with all this Tom Bombadill crap?’ …. And I am no Tolkien, lol!
Here is a paint of one of the characters in The Mythic Forest.
Fremde the Strange, a self-exiled hermit, was once called Rikard when he lived among other humans. He is also called Stranseir by the Elves, and Prexnos by the Faeries… all names that translate as “the strange and curious one.”
He turned away from his own kind, fleeing what he saw as humanity’s ignorance and cruelty, and wound up living in the wild. There, he met an Elf, a forward thinker who set out to prove men were just as capable and deserving of magic as his own race, and who bound magic to Fremde via tattoos of spells and runes. These tattoos had the unintended effect of further ostracizing Fremde… the superstitious humans found him frightening, and the elitist Elves saw him as a fraud, a cheap parody of themselves.
It was the faery folk however, who knew his heart and chose him for an important task…
I have nearly finished reading my novel in long sessions to get a feel for continuity and pace and all that fun stuff, and though I had reviewed it a million times for grammar, word choice, etc., I still find tiny things to change. My biggest pet peeves are the occasional instances of “I used that word too much in the last few paragraphs!”. So off we go to the online thesaurus!
Let me jump off track here. I remember back before there was an internet, when I was in grade school I needed to buy one of those little “Roget’s (?) Pocket Thesaurus” for class. I was in the local pharmacy buying an X-Men comic, and on the off chance they had such a thing I asked the cashier where I could find one. That’s not so strange, is it? I mean they always put in those racks at the beginning of the school year with packages of pens, pencils, erasers, notebooks, glue, compasses, etc… So the lady who bore a strange resemblance to the mom of the family of thieves in “The Goonies” :
Says to me : “What’s a fasoris?”
Anyways, back to proofreading, I would like to share a little gem I discovered weeks ago when researching medieval life to make sure what I was writing was accurate. I don’t recall what I was looking for, but somehow came across this Brit’s youtube videos. He has a wonderful sense of humor, sort of a Hugh Laurie vibe. He apparently does a lot of historical reenactments, cosplay and so on, so not only has a good historical knowledge but a practical one as well. He found out (the hard way sometimes) about little details like uses of fire, weapon and armor details, etc. He mocks the Hollywood versions of things, like sound and lighting effects, which are done simply cause they look or sound cool, but are completely wrong. Of course, the world has grown up seeing these things in movies, and we assume its real.
I had a scene in a castle, and described a scene where the flicker and sputtering of torches created all this tension and mood and yadda-yadda-yadda…. and then I saw the following video and went back and rewrote it all.
In my proof reading last night, I caught the mistake of mentioning “torches” instead of “lanterns” pages after my rewrite.
Which is what got me on this sidetrack.
Or was it a sidetrack? I was talking about proof reading.
What the hell did I start this post for? Ah, never mind.
Just enjoy the videos.
I finally got the physical proof of the fantasy novel I have been working on since the beginning of the year!
Being of grumpy nature, my first words upon opening the package were “God damn it!” Ha ha ha.
I was of course referring to how dark the cover printed- most of my painting simply came out black. As I have griped about in previous posts, what you see in you actual drawing file versus what gets saved when converted to a .jpeg or .pic or .png is a whole other animal. Over the last year I have searched for clues online on how to get things to come out right, but have had no luck.
I actually thought my prayers were answered when I had to submit the drawing file to the printer, cause they required a PDF file. When I saved it as such, I was shocked to see that it looked identical to my drawing file version. No way! I cried… finally I had found a format that looked like what I had intended. Well, now I know it looks good, but prints terribly. The other formats look worse, but print better.
Back to the drawing board (no pun intended, but what the hell, it works).